haiku
Posted by:
lastdan
haiku -
15/11/2002
14:47
rum and coke on ice
how about a twist with that
why not, its friday
Posted by:
davec
Re: haiku -
15/11/2002
15:00
I can't wait to leave
This darn Office Space
It drives me bonkers
Posted by:
pgrzelak
Re: haiku -
15/11/2002
15:35
My vacation days.
But my workload must be done.
Corporate profits.
Posted by:
wfaulk
Re: haiku -
15/11/2002
16:57
Two of my favorites (not original):
cherry blossoms fall
is a sneaky haiku trick
cherry blossoms fall
haiku's inventor
must have had seven fingers
on his middle hand
Posted by:
wfaulk
Re: haiku -
15/11/2002
17:07
To be pedantic, a 5-7-5 poem without a seasonal reference is not a haiku. It would
more
accurately be a
senryuu
, but even that's not totally accurate.
Posted by:
tonyc
Re: haiku -
15/11/2002
19:51
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Posted by:
pgrzelak
Re: haiku -
15/11/2002
19:55
okay... How about...
Clicking of key strokes
Sleepy eyes on the display
Winter snows drifting
Posted by:
lastdan
Re: haiku -
15/11/2002
21:46
so you should include
winter, summer, spring and fall
when you write haikus?
edit: weak, sorry
Posted by:
genixia
Re: haiku -
15/11/2002
23:38
Autumn brings to me
The Guinness feeling. To drink
It gives me much Joy.
Posted by:
genixia
Re: haiku -
15/11/2002
23:39
Someone better snaity check that...I've been out
Posted by:
ithoughti
Re: haiku -
16/11/2002
10:05
jumping up and down
fumbling with my zipper
don't eat yellow snow
Posted by:
RobotCaleb
Re: haiku -
16/11/2002
18:32
not original, but clever. i heard a variant, but have since forgotten it.
I hate all haiku
Because you can only use
Seventeen syllab-
Posted by:
RobotCaleb
Re: haiku -
16/11/2002
18:33
ah yes..
Any moron can
write haiku; just stop after
seventeen syllab-
Posted by:
svferris
Re: haiku -
16/11/2002
18:34
Brewed some beer last week
Can't wait until it is aged
My beer calls to me
Posted by:
ithoughti
Re: haiku -
17/11/2002
09:16
not sure what you know
to me it's original
it came from my head
Posted by:
davec
Re: haiku -
17/11/2002
12:08
Brewed some beer last week
Can't wait until it is aged
My beer calls to me
Brew a beer you say
what type of beer might it be
ale or lager please
Posted by:
svferris
Re: haiku -
17/11/2002
13:43
Brewed chocolate stout
Creamy head; dark, nice and thick
Can't wait to have one