It's not my place to say this because I'm just a mere sage in the world of photography... But, IMO, your photo would definitely rank in the photography mags I read. The composition is great: good focus on the eyes, the blur nicely captures the action and the angle of the front legs helps draw the viewer into the picture.

I would be proud to submit this pic in some of the online photo competitions out there.

It's a pity the mosquito is so small and doesn't compete in the overall frame.